Post by cooly44 on Aug 16, 2018 16:55:11 GMT
I'm not going to worry about reading them in order, as I already sense that this is the only one I'll bother reading. I'm only on the third chapter but I'm not overly impressed. She does something I can't tolerate in writers, which is describe the food they're eating.
She leaned toward him, her elbows and forearms resting on the croissant flakes on the pine table, and took his hand.
"Yes," she agreed, letting go of his hand to take a sip of café au lait.
I hate that kind of nonsense.
She leaned toward him, her elbows and forearms resting on the croissant flakes on the pine table, and took his hand.
"Yes," she agreed, letting go of his hand to take a sip of café au lait.
I hate that kind of nonsense.