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Post by poelzig on Mar 1, 2020 6:50:36 GMT
I see you're at it again much to my amusement. Heads up tho. Your 7 hours in Milan net in the op changed to 9 hours in a recent post. Most people are not blessed with my observational skills but thats no excuse for you to be lazy. You provide so few details (since you must guard against even a cursory fact check) you should make sure those details don't change. If I may offer some advice, it's all fictional anyway so have a little fun with it. If you were creative you wouldn't need to pretend so obviously anything too exciting is not possible but perhaps don't just google a foreign city and then list the top 5 sights and say you've seen those and can someone suggest what else there is to do there.
Is there going to be a corona virus component in this one as the drama/sympathy angle? Several months ago would have been more timely. Also you neglected the usual "hints" that you are on a sold out tour or been flown in for some important insight only you have etc... Just a mention of a (of course) vague "event" you need to go to. It all feels a bit trite this time nora and I'm a bit disappointed. Even with your usual thread bumping and ego stroking I don't see this story going for multiple pages.
Anyway good luck and like I said have some fun with it.
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