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Post by islandmur on Aug 20, 2017 21:01:15 GMT
You kept denying it
You kept playing it down
You kept finding excuses
And now you are shocked
You could not close your eyes
“jews will not replace us”
You could not cover your ears
“Blood and soil”
You were shocked
You were angry
It was real
It was here
Living under the skin
Skin of your brethrens
Carriers they are
Carriers of hatred
Having gone underground
It had lain dormant in their hearts
Raising its ugly head once in a while
Thus barely noticed it had spread
You were warned
But you did not want to hear
You were told
But you did not want to listen
Now you are asking questions
Now you are paying attention
Now you believe in its existence
Now you know it never went away
It waited patiently
for the right primer
And having found it
It’s overflowing now
The pump has been primed
Who will stop the flow?
20th August 207
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Post by Marv on Aug 31, 2017 9:45:46 GMT
Is this about menstruation?
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Post by islandmur on Aug 31, 2017 10:16:19 GMT
Is this about menstruation? Marv..... it's about you!
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Post by Arlon10 on Aug 31, 2017 10:33:10 GMT
You kept denying it ... ... .... You were shocked ... ... ... Having gone underground It had lain dormant in their hearts ... ... ... Although the "rules" of English are often relaxed for some literary forms, I believe your use of English here, especially one difficult verb tense, deserves some points for being well within rules. I have not studied it all yet enough to comment further at this time.
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