Post by skribb on Aug 23, 2017 2:31:28 GMT
Rewatching Jurassic World (actually watching a fanedit). Some of the dialog is so stilted. Typical Hollywood syntax. But it's not just the way the dialog is written, the acting cues are equally artifical.
Stuff like;
And the ultra expository cheese:
(security guards find the indominus' flesh piece with the tracker embedded)
Masrani (Hollywood stock facial expression of surprise): What is that?
Owen (Hollywood stock facial expression of stern determination): That's her tracking implant. She clawed it out.
Claire (Hollywood stock facial expression of surprise): How would it know to do that?
Owen (Hollywood stock drama voice): She remembered where they put it in.
Why does Hollywood continue this fare? It's been like this for decades! You'd think by now in 2017 writers and directors would have been able to cultivate some finesse when creating scenes like this.
Anyone know what I'm talking about?
Stuff like;
Oh, Indominus wasn't bred. She was DESIGNED. She will be fifty feet long when fully grown. BIGGER than the T. rex
And the ultra expository cheese:
(security guards find the indominus' flesh piece with the tracker embedded)
Masrani (Hollywood stock facial expression of surprise): What is that?
Owen (Hollywood stock facial expression of stern determination): That's her tracking implant. She clawed it out.
Claire (Hollywood stock facial expression of surprise): How would it know to do that?
Owen (Hollywood stock drama voice): She remembered where they put it in.
Why does Hollywood continue this fare? It's been like this for decades! You'd think by now in 2017 writers and directors would have been able to cultivate some finesse when creating scenes like this.
Anyone know what I'm talking about?
