Post by Leo of Red Keep on Oct 17, 2017 9:40:43 GMT
Watch it, it's fun and a lot better than what you got:
Good ideas:
Daenerys landing in Dorne and splitting her forces to the Reach and Dragonstone with King's Landing as primary target.
Introducing open conflict into Daenerys' team.
Littlefinger being given some actual plotting.
Jon and Sansa having conflicting views over the Riverlands instead of philosophical differences.
Jon going to Dragonstone as a conqueror, not as a good-willed beggar.
Dragon ballistas being an old idea of Joffrey. He loved his crossbow.
Sam going through a serious set of activities at the Citadel instead of that ridiculous "shit montage" they thought idiots would find funny.
Melisandre delivering Dragonstone to Daenerys and telling her about Jon's miraculous nature.
Gendry turning up in the Riverlands.
Greyworm dying through Daenerys' fault.
Obara Sand at the Citadel pointing Sam to a book Oberyn told her about.
Bran's access to "visions" being somewhat limited and discussed.
Jon saying he never really left the Night's Watch.
Bad ideas:
Littlefinger inventing false sources of dragonglass.
Cersei blaming the destruction of the Sept on someone else is out of character. She wants her enemies to know what she is capable of.
Super-Arya infiltrating Casterly Rock. A mute castelan wouldn't make sense.
Pod killing Brienne is too much of a "shocking twist".
Bronn given a heroic death: have him die miserably in battle while helping Jaime out instead. Besides, he has no jousting training either.
Good ideas:
Daenerys landing in Dorne and splitting her forces to the Reach and Dragonstone with King's Landing as primary target.
Introducing open conflict into Daenerys' team.
Littlefinger being given some actual plotting.
Jon and Sansa having conflicting views over the Riverlands instead of philosophical differences.
Jon going to Dragonstone as a conqueror, not as a good-willed beggar.
Dragon ballistas being an old idea of Joffrey. He loved his crossbow.
Sam going through a serious set of activities at the Citadel instead of that ridiculous "shit montage" they thought idiots would find funny.
Melisandre delivering Dragonstone to Daenerys and telling her about Jon's miraculous nature.
Gendry turning up in the Riverlands.
Greyworm dying through Daenerys' fault.
Obara Sand at the Citadel pointing Sam to a book Oberyn told her about.
Bran's access to "visions" being somewhat limited and discussed.
Jon saying he never really left the Night's Watch.
Bad ideas:
Littlefinger inventing false sources of dragonglass.
Cersei blaming the destruction of the Sept on someone else is out of character. She wants her enemies to know what she is capable of.
Super-Arya infiltrating Casterly Rock. A mute castelan wouldn't make sense.
Pod killing Brienne is too much of a "shocking twist".
Bronn given a heroic death: have him die miserably in battle while helping Jaime out instead. Besides, he has no jousting training either.
