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Post by MCDemuth on Mar 24, 2017 9:12:53 GMT
My biggest is with the film was...
"Cadet" Kirk becoming "Captain" of a Starship!
It was so unrealistic... The military doesn't work that way.
Seriously... What ever happened to the concepts of "Chain Of Command", and "Time In Grade"?
Captain Pike could NOT have been the only "graduated" officer in Starfleet... Shouldn't there have other officers on the Enterprise that should have taken command?
And even if the main mission in the film involved a cadet crew, at the end of the film, once Captain Pike was no longer in command, and the Enterprise returned home, Starfleet should have assigned an experienced officer to take command of the Enterprise.
In addition, I know that if I had been an officer in Starfleet for years, and some Cadet was made Captain over me... I would be very upset. I can imagine that Starfleet HQ got a lot of complaints from Starfleet officers all over the Alpha quadrant over that.
Now with that said, I do understand the writers & producers were trying to set up a franchise of new films, with Kirk as Captain...
But come on, they could have done that with other and more realistic ways of storytelling...
It just seems like they were lazy, and didn't care if it was believable or not.
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Post by azzajones on Mar 27, 2017 6:17:33 GMT
My biggest issue remains the whole of Engineering, it looks like a factory and something that couldn't possibly be inside the Enterprise.
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Post by MCDemuth on Mar 27, 2017 6:54:38 GMT
My biggest issue remains the whole of Engineering, it looks like a factory and something that couldn't possibly be inside the Enterprise. Yeah... And at the beginning, didn't Uhura have a communication station that was next to a reactor or something... What's up with all that? Then you go on the bridge, and it's all white and sterile like a doctor's office. I guess when the designer was telling the engineers how to build the ship, he had "Numb Tongue."
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Post by Deleted on Mar 27, 2017 15:01:50 GMT
The cadet thing didn't bother me too much because there was an excuse in story - they were responding to a crisis on Vulcan, using cadets to crew ships because nobody else was available. So there were next to no "real" officers available to man those posts.
Seems reasonable to me.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2017 4:59:37 GMT
Promoting a cadet, who would be an ensign upon graduation, to the rank of captain is maybe the most unrealistic thing that happened in the film. That's saying a lot, too. Starfleet could not possibly be so depleted of command officers that they would pluck a cadet right out of the academy and be given command of a starship. The modern equivalent would be giving command of an aircraft carrier to an ensign. Not a chance.
An earlier post touched on the engineering section and that did bother me, too. It looked like the insides of a modern 2009 power plant. Which would make zero sense for a starship, where they would want to minimize space, not mazimize it. Yes, it was busy but didn't really look or feel futuristic.
It's a very entertaining film, though.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2017 20:44:39 GMT
My biggest is with the film was... "Cadet" Kirk becoming "Captain" of a Starship! It was so unrealistic... The military doesn't work that way. Seriously... What ever happened to the concepts of "Chain Of Command", and "Time In Grade"? Captain Pike could NOT have been the only "graduated" officer in Starfleet... Shouldn't there have other officers on the Enterprise that should have taken command? And even if the main mission in the film involved a cadet crew, at the end of the film, once Captain Pike was no longer in command, and the Enterprise returned home, Starfleet should have assigned an experienced officer to take command of the Enterprise. In addition, I know that if I had been an officer in Starfleet for years, and some Cadet was made Captain over me... I would be very upset. I can imagine that Starfleet HQ got a lot of complaints from Starfleet officers all over the Alpha quadrant over that. Now with that said, I do understand the writers & producers were trying to set up a franchise of new films, with Kirk as Captain... But come on, they could have done that with other and more realistic ways of storytelling... It just seems like they were lazy, and didn't care if it was believable or not. I agree but I also disagree . This isn't the first time this happened. During the prime reality, in DS9 episode "Valiant" - the episode about a group of Red Squad cadets in control of a Defiant class starship. On his deathbed, Captain Ramirez gave Cadet Tim Watters a battlefield commission as "acting" captain, who used that rank to also promote others as well.However, this happened after all the regular officers were killed in combat. in Star Trek( 2009) Other officers should have been given first officer rank over Kirk first.Despite those rare circumstances, this isnt the first time this happened. Keep in mind that Captain Pike knew Kirks dad, and respected him. He figured his son would have his same qualities in leadership and tactics. On top of that, Kirk possessed a genius-level intellect. Pike figured this is the best way to get Kirk to stop being a loser and start doing something useful with that potential. Besides, Kirk affirmed Pikes faith in him by warning him about the Romulan ship- this act saved the entire crew from certain death.
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Post by moviebuffbrad on May 17, 2017 9:46:43 GMT
I kinda wish they stuck closer to first few episodes of the OS, like having Gary Mitchell and saving Chekov for a sequel.
But as a film, I think the main issue is the villain. Nero was kind of boring.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2017 1:28:56 GMT
The thing that bothered me the most is probably Nero's motivation. He's upset about his planet being destroyed and his wife being killed. But it's nonsensical to blame Spock for this, given that Spock was trying to save them.
It's like murdering the family of the firefighter who wasn't able to save your loved ones from a fire. Nonsense.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 19:37:09 GMT
My biggest issue was the 25 years between Nero showing up and older Prime universe Spock. The theatrical version had no backstory to this. I am aware the cutscenes show him captured by Klingons and held at Rura Penta. But this was a major plot whole that should have been addressed Also the cutscenes show him escape, but how the hell did he get the Narada back from the Klingons? Why didnt the Klingons reverse engineer the Narada and take over the entire galaxy with tech from 129 years in the future?Noneof that made sense
On the screen I kept wondering- what the hell did Nero and his crew do for 25 years? Where did they go without informing half the quadrant about who they are and where they came from? 25 years is a long time. What was Nero doing all this damnn time?! jacking off?!
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 19:49:11 GMT
The thing that bothered me the most is probably Nero's motivation. He's upset about his planet being destroyed and his wife being killed. But it's nonsensical to blame Spock for this, given that Spock was trying to save them. It's like murdering the family of the firefighter who wasn't able to save your loved ones from a fire. Nonsense. Well I admit That bothered me only a little but how different was it when Annorax used the Krenim temporal weapon ship to play God and erase entire species from existence just to bring his wife back ? Tragic villains are rarely rational. I guess Nero missed his family too much. Romulans usually are fairly rational- brutal but rational. Tragic villians are not rational . Nero was so heartbroken he just went whackadoo.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 19:57:12 GMT
I kinda wish they stuck closer to first few episodes of the OS, like having Gary Mitchell and saving Chekov for a sequel. But as a film, I think the main issue is the villain. Nero was kind of boring. They made a trek fanfilm with some original cast members of various trek series'. Of Gods and man. Its a good premise - I wont spoil it . . www.youtube.com/watch?v=kFqAME7dx58
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 20:40:16 GMT
The thing that bothered me the most is probably Nero's motivation. He's upset about his planet being destroyed and his wife being killed. But it's nonsensical to blame Spock for this, given that Spock was trying to save them. It's like murdering the family of the firefighter who wasn't able to save your loved ones from a fire. Nonsense. Well I admit That bothered me only a little but how different was it when Annorax used the Krenim temporal weapon ship to play God and erase entire species from existence just to bring his wife back ? Tragic villains are rarely rational. I guess Nero missed his family too much. That's very different, you even describe the difference! Annorax was doing what he did in order to try to restore his wife. He was willing to destroy other cultures to that end, but that destruction was not his goal, it was the collateral damage involved in reaching his goal. Nero, by contrast, never once said that he wanted to change the future to make sure his wife lived. His sole stated goal was to destroy all the Federation planets so that the man who tried to save his planet would be really, really unhappy. Which is actually a shame, because they could have simply had him say something like "You Federation types have held us Romulans back for two hundred years, so when the supernova came we had to crawl to you for help because we were too weak to help ourselves. Well I'm going to wipe out the Federation now, so Romulan can be strong in the future and we can beat the black hole ourselves without your help!" And then his motivation would actually make sense. In fact that would be so easy that I'm sorely tempted to believe that it was the intent, but the scene got cut for time. But that's the thing with Abrams. He's waaaay more into the visual and emotional aspect of a script than he's ever been into character motivations and plot logic.
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2017 20:52:31 GMT
Well I admit That bothered me only a little but how different was it when Annorax used the Krenim temporal weapon ship to play God and erase entire species from existence just to bring his wife back ? Tragic villains are rarely rational. I guess Nero missed his family too much. That's very different, you even describe the difference! Annorax was doing what he did in order to try to restore his wife. He was willing to destroy other cultures to that end, but that destruction was not his goal, it was the collateral damage involved in reaching his goal. Nero, by contrast, never once said that he wanted to change the future to make sure his wife lived. His sole stated goal was to destroy all the Federation planets so that the man who tried to save his planet would be really, really unhappy. Which is actually a shame, because they could have simply had him say something like "You Federation types have held us Romulans back for two hundred years, so when the supernova came we had to crawl to you for help because we were too weak to help ourselves. Well I'm going to wipe out the Federation now, so Romulan can be strong in the future and we can beat the black hole ourselves without your help!" And then his motivation would actually make sense. In fact that would be so easy that I'm sorely tempted to believe that it was the intent, but the scene got cut for time. But that's the thing with Abrams. He's waaaay more into the visual and emotional aspect of a script than he's ever been into character motivations and plot logic. Actually its similar. The entire reason why Annorax spent 200 years trying to bring his wife back is because when he first used it, Krenim used the weapon-ship to wipe out one of the Krenims mortal enemies,accidentally including an antibody to the Krenim genome that his enemies introduced- which killed Annorexs wife.. Annorex destroyed an entire species over silly disputes. Nobody on Annorex's crew blamed him for what he originally did. they just were upset that it was over 200 years with no success. Didn't Nero want to wipe out the federation so romulus would be dominant in the galaxy as well as take revenge But previously he said he wasnt allied with the Romulan empire( We stand apart) Another inconsistency in the plot? I don't remember.Didn't he say something of that sort to Pike while he was Neros prisoner?
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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2017 2:20:03 GMT
Actually its similar. The entire reason why Annorax spent 200 years trying to bring his wife back is because when he first used it, Krenim used the weapon-ship to wipe out one of the Krenims mortal enemies,accidentally including an antibody to the Krenim genome that his enemies introduced- which killed Annorexs wife.. Annorex destroyed an entire species over silly disputes. Nobody on Annorex's crew blamed him for what he originally did. they just were upset that it was over 200 years with no success. But the difference is that Annorax was trying to actually achieve something. Now I freely admit that restoring one person is a trivial goal, and so you could say of both men that they were killing on a mass scale for a trivial reason. But that's a pretty thin distinction to make! Whereas the HUGE difference is that Annorax had a goal - he wasn't trying to destroy, he was trying to restore - and destroying either by accident, or just as a price he was willing to pay, depending on how you look at it. Nero, on the other hand, just seemed to be hell bent on destroying purely for the sake of hurting Spock. That's it, that's his entire motivation in the movie. Spock failed to kill his wife, so he wants to destroy everything Spock cares about. He has a single line where he says "My purpose, Christopher, is to not simply avoid the destruction of the home that I love, but to create a Romulus that exists free of the Federation. You see, only then will she be truly saved. That is why I will destroy all the remaining Federation planets, starting with yours." But that's literally the only reference to it that I can find. He says nothing about wanting to save his wife. Yeah, he says he doesn't represent the Empire and "we stand apart".
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Post by bluerisk on May 27, 2017 23:37:50 GMT
non canon
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Post by Jedan Archer on Jun 22, 2017 12:35:07 GMT
This film should be called Star Dreck, it's a space travesty with an sterile, lens-flared look.
Kirk becoming captain is a classic piece of MarySue writing. The prototype Mary Sue in A Trekker's Tale literally took over the Enterprise too (but with a better written reason). Rey (MaRey Sue) in Force Awakens took over the Millennium Falcon with Chewbacca being her co-pilot (without any real reason).
Shows you how much this dreck is pandering to the most lowbrow common denominator.
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Post by bb15 on Jun 27, 2017 20:04:56 GMT
My only problem was with the promotion at the end of the movie where cadet Kirk became captain. The film should have had a time lapse sequence where Kirk graduated from the academy, served on the Enterprise and then became captain.
Otherwise I think that "Star Trek (2009)" is pretty good.
Imo at least, BB ;-)
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