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Post by ShadowSouL: Padawan of Yoda on Dec 23, 2017 18:36:54 GMT
Write the scene the way you would have done it.
Please include dialogue.
Thank you.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2017 19:23:42 GMT
Write the scene the way you would have done it. Please include dialogue. Thank you. Luke's eyes squint as he examines the hilt, hesitant to grip it with comfort, a momentary sense of dread lurking in his gaze. The moment passes and is replaced by resolve. Bringing the saber to life, he begins casually flicking it through the air, each gesture mimicking precisely the first time he'd held it on Tatooine so many years ago. He brings the generational weapon to an abrupt halt parallel to his face and stares into its light, (a hint of joy spreads on his face, made tender with pain and nostalgia) into his past... "This was with me from the beginning..." ....into his future....the look of dread resumes... "....and will be in the end." His brows furrow. "I have foreseen this," he whispers. Luke reaches out suddenly and the blue saber cartwheels through the open space between himself and Rey, stopping just short of Rey's windpipe. The blade hums, stationary but ominous. "How did you get this? Who are you?" |
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Post by President Ackbar™ on Dec 23, 2017 19:39:42 GMT
Ignites saber.
Chops Rey's head off.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 23, 2017 20:46:25 GMT
Luke takes Lightsaber.
Luke: Thanks, but I made a new one like 30 years ago... It's green!
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Post by Primemovermithrax Pejorative on Dec 23, 2017 20:49:13 GMT
Takes light saber, looks it over. Smiles.
"This will go for big bucks on Ebay."
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2017 0:53:19 GMT
"This came with a hand, do you happen to have the hand?"
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Post by simplemoviecommenter on Dec 24, 2017 4:23:26 GMT
"Oh good you have one too. I've been planning to commit seppuku but I needed an appointed second to behead me. It's time for the Jedi to end."
"Oh good another toy to pleasure myself with."
In a Gollum voice "My precious..."
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Post by ShadowSouL: Padawan of Yoda on Dec 24, 2017 7:38:21 GMT
Luke takes the lightsaber, looks over it carefully and solemnly, ignites it, and proceeds to cut his hair and shave his face for at least the next 30 minutes while Rey watches in expressionless silence.
Star Wars: Episode VIII -- A New Shave
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Post by darkpast on Dec 24, 2017 7:48:20 GMT
Rian Johnson came up with worst possible resolution, that sets the tone of utter disappointment in the film
I guess he could have stuck up his ass, because why not.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2017 7:55:52 GMT
Rian Johnson came up with worst possible resolution, that sets the tone of utter disappointment in the film I guess he could have stuck up his ass, because why not. What made it worse for me is my audience laughed when he threw it over his shoulder like it was hilarious. |
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